Wednesday, September 05, 2007
he said, she said
he said, she said (a failure to communicate)
by hardCore
she said, "you're deep"
referring to the sound of my voice
rather than the words they held
i said, "what a dress"
referring to how sexy it looked stretched out across my floor
opposed to spaghetti strapped over her shoulders
she whispered, "i love this"
referring to what she hoped "this" would become
i mumbled, "me too"
referring to what i thought "this" was
we both moaned, "yes!"
she, thinking of him
me, thinking of the previous her
the next morning, we both waved "goodbye"
she meant, for now
i meant, forever
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4 comments:
And this is where the drama and problems begin.Communication is so important. Good post.
that was a good one....
this was awesome
Great post...
and I love your poetry!
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